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Fischerspooner - Never Win
"and it‘s the desperation to hold on to
something that can‘t be held on to
so, don‘t waste your time filling up my words
don‘t tell me why, assume the worst."
Title
Date Posted
Date Created
Ratings
Votes
Creativity
Form
Imagery
Overall
adrenaline numbs me at all the wrong moments
06/9/2006
06/08/2006
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
And I was the lesser
09/10/2008
09/09/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
aortic thoughts
05/3/2006
05/03/2006
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
august and I have never been very fond of each other
08/22/2006
08/21/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
crease my pages gently if you want to hold your place
06/8/2006
06/07/2006
11
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
I always was the wind
10/13/2007
10/13/2007
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
I am my own overabundance
05/3/2006
05/03/2006
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
I call out to wake myself up
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Explicit
09/11/2006
09/11/2006
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
I don't deserve a curtain call
08/15/2006
08/15/2006
1
Imaginative
Competent
Descriptive
Clever
I don't do me anymore
12/23/2006
12/23/2006
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
I get lost in your current
06/10/2006
06/09/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
I'll lay blame, not flowers, on your grave
07/8/2006
05/12/2005
5
Brilliant
Well-Framed
Evocative
Well Written
in the absence of cause, there is still effect
08/4/2006
08/03/2006
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
less than productive
10/7/2007
10/07/2007
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
my karma totals to: 666
08/15/2006
08/14/2006
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
My new name
06/30/2006
12/22/2003
4
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
off the wall
11/17/2006
11/16/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
our exchanges make me very temperamental
07/8/2006
05/30/2005
3
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Evocative
Well Written
painting without hands
08/6/2006
08/05/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
pretty like drugs
-
Explicit
05/24/2006
05/24/2006
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
same old, same old takes me by surprise
09/30/2006
09/29/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
they'll call it an anniversary to dress it up
08/30/2006
08/29/2006
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
untitled
05/29/2006
05/28/2006
1
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Evocative
Well Written
vicodin
09/6/2006
09/05/2006
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
where and when I reached the end
06/14/2006
05/17/2005
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
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