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My new name

by Vere Mantratriad

I look to see what he carved into my
chest, I run my fingers over deeply
cut letters, fingertips sticking inside
wounded raw flesh.

I trace each letter, spelling out my new
name. Reading slowly, silently, though
feeling my lips in trance; not caring for
the meaning.

Treasuring each syllable's sound, cradling
every vowel, each consanant as though their
very birth took place inside the flesh of
my open chest.

I fall to my knees,
anemic and grateful.
A new name to guide me,
a new name to tell me who I am,
a new name carved within my chest,
by The Boy Who Never Loved Me.

12/22/2003

Author's Note: repost 12/22/03

Posted on 06/30/2006
Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 06/30/06 at 05:29 AM

This is sadder than sad. This is tragic. Love's not a game of slice and dice You know that, don't you? Scary but powerful work!

Posted by Melissa Arel on 07/04/06 at 01:56 AM

Wow, V.. awesome poem..

Posted by Christel Crews on 07/04/06 at 03:51 AM

deeply moving.. sad and so often true..

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/06 at 03:04 PM

Ouch! Painfully excellent in every sense of the word.

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