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adrenaline numbs me at all the wrong moments

by Vere Mantratriad

just as I
failed to notice
slicing my fingers
while opening
an eagerly awaited
package

I didn't realize
that I was
stabbing myself
in the chest
while talking
to you

06/08/2006

Posted on 06/09/2006
Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/09/06 at 02:29 AM

Such precise wording - very good!

Posted by Christel Crews on 06/09/06 at 11:21 PM

um, i think you're reading my mind or something.. i've felt this way very recently.. its a great piece!

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