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Damaradeaella
dark and demented entrails
this folder contains poems with a darker side to them, including poems that relate to death or suicidal tendencies... as well as my inner view of mental disorders... and including poems of angst...
Title
Date Posted
Date Created
Ratings
Votes
Creativity
Form
Imagery
Overall
bloody checkmate
02/2/2004
02/01/2004
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
carnage
01/27/2004
01/26/2004
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Evocative
Memorable
dry heaving
11/4/2003
11/03/2003
3
Outstanding
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
fear and loathing in palmdale
09/15/2003
07/19/2003
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
inside these walls
03/22/2003
02/11/2003
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
my twisted mind and the voices
12/9/2003
12/08/2003
7
Outstanding
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
one pill, two pills, three pills, four
03/13/2003
03/10/2003
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
pathetic state
10/8/2003
10/08/2003
3
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Evocative
Well Written
prescriptiondrugaddiction
07/3/2003
07/03/2003
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
rose garden of thorns
07/29/2003
06/04/2003
1
Imaginative
Outstanding Flow
Evocative
Has Potential
run away
03/27/2003
03/25/2003
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
stress can kill you
09/24/2003
09/23/2003
1
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Descriptive
Well Written
the Downfall
04/18/2003
04/18/2003
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
walk the plank
07/18/2003
07/18/2003
1
Imaginative
Well-Framed
Evocative
Has Potential
would you cry if i died tomorrow?
03/13/2003
02/16/2003
This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
write this sickness out
03/13/2003
02/17/2003
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Evocative
Memorable
you better learn (language)
-
Explicit
03/13/2003
02/17/2003
1
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Vivid
Well Written
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