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dry heaving
by Michele Schottelkorbvomit cannot justifiably describe
what i wish to do at this precise moment
the twisted innards of our dysfunctional little dwelling
sickens me to the point of dry heaving
grotesque?
some may agree with this sentiment
however
sit in my room
for just one day and tell me it does not make you nauseous
11/03/2003 Author's Note: this is probably more like a journal entry... blah...
Posted on 11/04/2003
Copyright © 2025 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/04/03 at 05:20 PM Ouch! Sounds like you and your family are going through some real rocky times. Hang in there, I'm sure it'll pass. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/05/03 at 11:35 PM Too vivid... too painful.... too many memories! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/06/03 at 04:25 AM love the vivid images painted...wonderfully raw... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 11/07/03 at 09:14 AM Very rough and raw, subject wise, but put together nicely in a verse form. Journal entry, maybe, but it works as a verse just fine. And yes, something we can identify with, being stuck in a bad situation like that. Here's to escape. |
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