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Member Since: March 2000
Last Login: 01/25/2016

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How long will I let you paint me?
Brushed and bruised in your misguided ideals
Splattered with self-pity and deceit.
Will I ever be enough?

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Title	Date Posted	Date Created	Ratings
Title	Date Posted	Date Created	Votes	Creativity	Form	Imagery	Overall
Broken Pieces of Me [Revised]	01/17/2004	01/17/2004	3	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
Eternal	07/27/2015	07/27/2015	This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
Forbidden desire	11/25/2008	11/25/2008	1	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
Freedom in the rain	07/27/2003	07/27/2003	6	Outstanding	Outstanding Flow	Evocative	Memorable
[Haiku] Cloud Master	05/28/2003	05/28/2003	6	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
I believe	01/25/2016	01/24/2016	1	Imaginative	Well-Framed	Descriptive	Well Written
I wish my life is a fairytale	01/3/2006	01/03/2006	2	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
Kiss me	01/5/2005	01/05/2005	3	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
Our final truce	01/15/2009	01/15/2009	This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
(Over and Under the Bridge) Now playing...	12/22/2004	12/22/2004	1	Brilliant	Outstanding Flow	Vivid	Memorable
When is the right time to quit?	01/13/2009	01/13/2009	This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
You let me fall apart	09/9/2010	09/09/2010	This Poem Is Currently Not Rated
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