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Kiss me

by Rommel Cruz

Kiss me
Let’s sail away
And chase the rainbow's brilliance
In our burning eyes

Let's fly away
Our hearts singing
With the sweet whispers
Of a thousand angels’ choir

So kiss me...

01/05/2005

Author's Note: an old poem i dug up while cleaning my files

Posted on 01/05/2005
Copyright © 2019 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 01/05/05 at 02:50 PM

I bet you have lots of girlfriends...lol Good poem man. Good feeling being kissed ain't it.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/05/05 at 03:54 PM

This is very romantic and would be a good poem to use in a valentine this year. A good poem to come out of the old files and get a breath of air!

Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 01/05/05 at 06:36 PM

This is just special - so glad you dug it up!

Posted by Matt Forget on 01/06/05 at 12:47 AM

I love it...I agree...a great Valentine's Day poem for that special sweetheart. ;)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/09/05 at 10:08 PM

Rommel, I'm glad you decided to repost it. I wish I had someone special to give something like this to. I like the return to the simple request at the end of the poem. Good work!

Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/11/05 at 05:44 AM

you're not gonna change into a frog when I do, are ya? j/k

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/09/05 at 10:51 PM

Sweet without any of the corniness that goes along with "sweet" poetry.

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