You let me fall apart

by Rommel Cruz

where were you when my life fell apart?
i searched high for a savior, you were nowhere in sight
i begged for mercy, only nothingness echoed back

splattered on the rocky ground, why didn't you see me?
i kept reaching for your hand, you never reached back
i thought you loved me, why was i abandoned?

i felt alone. i was alone. and you let me fall apart


Posted on 09/09/2010
Copyright © 2021 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/09/10 at 10:33 AM

...rommel, no reach so you could write this. this is stout, heavy. tight.

Posted by Andrea Colton on 09/11/10 at 07:41 AM

I'm sorry.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/01/12 at 07:19 PM

Although not to the degree that you have, I too have been abandoned at least once in my life, so I can empathize, feel your pain. Accurate expression of the genre!

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