You let me fall apart
by Rommel Cruz
where were you when my life fell apart?
i searched high for a savior, you were nowhere in sight
i begged for mercy, only nothingness echoed back
splattered on the rocky ground, why didn't you see me?
i kept reaching for your hand, you never reached back
i thought you loved me, why was i abandoned?
i felt alone. i was alone. and you let me fall apart
Posted on 09/09/2010
Copyright © 2020 Rommel Cruz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/09/10 at 10:33 AM|
...rommel, no reach so you could write this. this is stout, heavy. tight.
|Posted by Andrea Colton on 09/11/10 at 07:41 AM|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/01/12 at 07:19 PM|
Although not to the degree that you have, I too have been abandoned at least once in my life, so I can empathize, feel your pain. Accurate expression of the genre!