|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Sarah George on 07/31/18 at 12:55 PM|
Ah, this is so lovely. With just a few lines you've created this vivid portrait of a brave, resilient, and resourceful man.
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/03/18 at 01:16 PM|
What a tribute! As I think about it, so much of my life seems to be my attempt to build something our of that sand that I hope will be a castle and not just a moat or something that will float away. And I am truly fortunate if someone in THIS era will think a few of them are castles. Your father was obviously successful because here you are. Right here. Right now. Building a castle for us. Thank you.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/03/18 at 08:32 PM|
So much said in these few lines. Really love the last two lines in particular.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/05/18 at 08:56 PM|
Nicely put Melissa!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/09/18 at 11:48 AM|
A gem of a poem. And the end is a cherry on this tort.