| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 05/08/03 at 12:15 AM You forgot the cd player with Kristofferson in it... this is awesome! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/08/03 at 01:52 AM liked this a lot. =) |
| Posted by Beth K Hannah on 05/08/03 at 04:47 AM very wonderful imagery! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/08/03 at 04:42 PM I like the wry sense of humor in this piece. Great clarity and grammer throughout. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/09/03 at 05:21 AM yeah! this has great energy (makes me think of the inspiring beginning of Easy Rider). thoroughly enjoyed the ride ;) |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 05/09/03 at 07:03 AM great read..I want to take that ride |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/10/03 at 03:07 AM Good one Old Lady. Welcome to Pathetic....Charlie |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/10/03 at 03:55 AM Hi Alex,
Good one, sounds kinda wild & free. if your able, I guess go for it. Long as Ya don't get too wild. Be careful on the motorcycle, hope your wearing protection for your head. I have no use for motorcycles, seen too many people after riding one, accidents. Be sfe, be careful. Peace & Joy, Jean |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/24/03 at 02:07 PM This is fun! A great expression of the desire to just be free, riding a motorcycle into the wind! (Actually at my age I would be extremely anxious! LOL!) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/01/03 at 06:51 PM freedom shouldn't be depending on anyone or anything....gotta get on that ride! Great read:) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 06/02/03 at 11:55 PM what a unique and well written poem...one of my favourites for sure... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/14/03 at 03:31 PM Extremely inspirational in an odd kinda way... great poem with a great feel. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/09/03 at 05:50 PM Is that a bug in your teeth, ya gotta love it. Gimme a chick that can kick start my Harley and I'm in hog heaven. Good stuff, Alex.
Peace... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/06/03 at 10:56 AM splendid notion of freedom riding her shirt tail off. Happy trails to you Alex. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/04/09 at 04:01 PM Love this! Congrats on POTD!
"And everything revved up to full throttle-
I will become freedom." words to live by!! Thank you.
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| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 03/04/09 at 04:58 PM This is excellent in every way. Congrats on the POTD! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/04/09 at 05:31 PM Sounds like fun! Can I come along for the ride?? I love that you equate motorcycles with FREEDOM. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/04/09 at 09:08 PM Great read. When you hit the road stop by Missouri and I'll get on my trike and have your back. Great poem. Harley grandma |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/05/09 at 12:10 AM Oh! far out!
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| Posted by Maria Massarella on 03/05/09 at 01:15 AM This poem had me smiling all day. wind in my hair. throttle tuned to freedom. a wonder ride to POTD! |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 03/05/09 at 04:13 AM I wasn't born yet (boy, I'll say anything if I think the opening line is OK! - sick) when your master-piece was first introduced to what I am sure was a very unsuspecting crowd. They must of been Wowed! I cannot find fault in anything else but myself, certainly in your work even if that was what I liked to look for ... fault ... fault-finding? Silly idea, huh? And even if I were an FF, there's nothing to fault with this work. I am bright enough to know you are writing with a pen that numbers view and the mold was broken way too soon for people like me without VIP rooms at Soothebey's to bid. (that's kinda' poetic, huh - dang sad too) ) I LOVE THIS! CAN YOU TELL? |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/05/09 at 05:51 PM Joyous two wheeled journey into freedom riding face first into the wind. |
