| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/04/03 at 04:15 AM Different poem for you Jadi. Very good....Charlie |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/04/03 at 12:14 PM deep touching poem...can't really find the right words to express the feeling I get reading this.
Something which doesn't happen too often.
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| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 01/04/03 at 04:33 PM i'll have to look up half those words, but I still enjoyed it. Definitely a fresh change of pace. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/05/03 at 01:59 AM This one is going to take time to digest! Your muse has been so quiet of late. Lots of symbolic imagery. Takes me back to one of your much earlier works whose title escapes me. The same mystical quality. Angelina figured in that one as well as I recall. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/06/03 at 12:51 AM Bless Angelina, her beauty is unparrallelled and your imagery cannot be beaten :) |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 01/06/03 at 11:41 AM exquisite |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 01/06/03 at 06:28 PM The view from here is breathtaking. Beautiful. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/07/03 at 01:00 AM What can I say that already hasn't been said? :) Amen to it all! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/08/03 at 04:40 AM What a journey! - flight of butterflies - light and darkness from sun and earth's cycles - sacred clensing of smudge - revisiting moments of creation. A real delight, jadi. I feel honored that you shared your (or her) awakening with me. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 01/08/03 at 11:51 PM WOnderful like the sparkle in the eyes of the star child.Congrats for being the Poet of the Month.Kudos. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 05:50 PM Eclectically spicy read Jadi. Paper wings forever! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/26/03 at 12:01 PM I would admit of destiny, it's patience rather than it's strenght, waiting waiting to take us all in fold. Tis gold this poem. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/27/03 at 06:18 PM Oh Jadi... |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 01/27/03 at 07:30 PM Very, very well written. Don't well what else to say but Bravo! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/29/03 at 01:38 PM I had to read this again because it is so pure ... "smudged our souls in sage" breaks my heart... Akh... this one is too powerful, too blinding for me to read often... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/30/03 at 05:56 PM Magically transports me right along with it and what a great ride! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/30/03 at 07:09 PM Enchanting read from start to finish. Not a word wasted or out of place. Glad I got to read this, and congrats on having it make the favorites list. |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 02/15/03 at 06:58 PM Gorgeous! You can literally feel the layers of imagery in it. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/15/03 at 11:42 PM once more with feeling, your words entrance the heart. vieni vedi jadi |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 11/13/11 at 03:31 PM What a great read to start my day. Bravo on this one jadi. |
