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The Library of Eli Skipp
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2008
Title
Date Posted
Date Created
Ratings
Votes
Creativity
Form
Imagery
Overall
a collaborative tanka written by thirteen amateurs.
01/30/2008
01/30/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
all things flotsam and jetsam on the beach before hurricanes.
09/24/2008
09/24/2008
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
because childhood abuse might excuse a little domestic violence.
09/24/2008
09/24/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
because you told me you dream of car crashes, too.
09/24/2008
09/24/2008
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
he is not her great pyrenees (II)
12/11/2008
12/11/2008
5
Brilliant
Well-Framed
Vivid
Memorable
here's my heartfelt relationship advice, from humble experience:
-
Explicit
09/24/2008
09/24/2008
2
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
he thinks i love every minute of it. (reponse to Elliot Thaler)
04/28/2008
04/28/2008
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
i am a jackalope.
05/6/2008
05/05/2008
5
Outstanding
Well-Framed
Evocative
Well Written
in response to napoleon's description de l'egypt.
02/2/2008
02/02/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
"once i go crazy, nothing will be too forward."
02/25/2008
02/24/2008
3
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
since pitbulls are illegal in dade county.
12/11/2008
12/10/2008
2
Brilliant
Well-Framed
Vivid
Well Written
smearing paint under one's eyelids.
03/2/2008
03/01/2008
4
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
we were bred for coursing, for racing --
08/22/2008
08/22/2008
6
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
when i was little i was most terrified of atom bombs and AIDS.
09/24/2008
09/24/2008
4
Outstanding
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
when told to write about a concern.
01/26/2008
01/26/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
you are a bear.
05/6/2008
05/05/2008
1
Brilliant
Outstanding Flow
Vivid
Memorable
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