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This Old House

by Glenn Currier

The paint is flaking and falling off
splotched edges
discoloration
stormy days
weathered years
creaking and leaking
cracking from heating
the physics of aging
and seasons of raging
the terrible toll
they are taking
makes you think this old house
needs replacing.

But listen to the voices
of laughter and loving
hear echoes of weeping
and promise keeping
poems that were spoken
being whole and broken
see the tears that were shed
the glories in bed
sighs and lies
some of them said
inside the house that was home
these many years.

Inside spirit reigns
with angels unchained
where heart and soul
on a journey bold
through seasons of pain
where demons were slain
new life was greeted
death was cheated
souls were enrolled
in miracle courses
treasures discovered
of higher forces.

This old house of seventy six years
holds joys along with fears.
The structure isn’t new
but inside
there is
youth.

07/22/2018

Author's Note: Written on my 76thbirthday July 22nd

Posted on 07/22/2018
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/22/18 at 09:27 PM

Happy Birthday, Glenn! This poem is a wonderful extended metaphor of your life. I really loved the "Creaking and leaking" and "cracking from heating" but for some reason my favorite lines are "souls were enrolled in miracle courses." Many more to you in both years and your terrific poems!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/23/18 at 09:34 AM

Happy Birthday Glenn. Perhaps 1 or 2 ghosts as well in such an old house? Really like the tight form and rhyming pattern adhered to in this one. Another poetic 'mission accomplished.'

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/24/18 at 02:03 PM

Happy Birthday, Glenn. Congratulations on your 76th. You share the same birthday with my mother who just turned 100. The poem is wonderful and subtle and speaks truth about aging, but it also speaks hope. I love how you ended it. May you e'er remain Forever Young.

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