| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/11 at 07:16 PM ...lost my first post...which said: great write, great! love me some of that Venus! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/31/11 at 04:35 PM The next time I see Venus and that smiling slice of light I will have a sour taste in my mouth and have an urge to go in and make lemonade. I love the lesson in Greek mythology too. This is delightful, George. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/01/11 at 04:14 AM "drop of lemon juice" - a unique visual for me. This reads smooth as silk, George, and I'm a sucker for a good story with your special slant. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 11/01/11 at 12:33 PM love the lemony allusions in this, George. So wistfully romantic throughout! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/06/11 at 08:12 PM Well penned, constructive reminder of Roman mythology, that nicely empowers today's lovers. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/06/11 at 10:46 PM This is serenely romantic. The exact type of poetry I like. |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/08/11 at 02:46 AM Nothing more I can say really; just excellent. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/13/11 at 04:29 PM wonderful read... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/02/12 at 01:19 PM it replenishes the soul to read this, George. the way you paint this scene, is so in keeping with the Romantics, and I suspect, my friend, that you may have been Keats or Shelley or Byron or other such great in a lifetime previous to this. |
