Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/01/09 at 05:30 AM lovely tribute your mother, I am sorry to hear about the battle with cancer, that must be hard for both of you. |
Posted by H.M Stevens on 10/01/09 at 01:54 PM you had this posted several years ago, and i printed it out and read it many times. i cant tell you how much it affected me. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/01/09 at 05:02 PM Oh, Chris, what a glorious paen to your mother. How it is filled with gratitude and life multiplied from in the son from the sum a mother's love. The richness and hope in your poem is alight in the present darkness. May its spirit enliven you during this trying and difficult period. Blessings and peace to you and your parents, my dear friend. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/01/09 at 10:42 PM It is unfortunate that time desends darkly on all things of beauty. One generation overseeing the vision of perpetuity in the next. Thoughtful, expressive and lovely, for love's sake alone. Thanks. |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/02/09 at 06:53 AM I can't say in mere words how much this poem touches me personally. My own mother is almost crippled from rheumatoid arthritis and this poem, especially that last stanza, speaks, no shouts to me of what I feel about my mother. Thank you Chris and I am so sorry for her having the fight of the dirge not yet broken by research! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/02/09 at 09:59 PM Deeply moving, almost epoch at the individual human level, yet so very personal. I am honored you have shared this with us. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/03/09 at 05:54 PM Your mother must find this most encouraging. A tribute to her and your poetic talent.
Your mother is in my prayers. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/05/09 at 04:30 AM Nice poem to your Mom Chris.....CharMin |
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 10/05/09 at 08:39 PM May your mom's battle be a strong one and may you find a way to fight along side her with your words and emotions. My thoughts and prayers are with you. smh |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/06/09 at 12:03 AM ...a touche to 'those who brungs us life'...well said, a patchwork of yearnings we can't speak... |