| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/17/09 at 04:09 PM ...man, what you did with a simple, lovely walk, picked-out the most quantum of importance, the ability to see with a third eye...the vision is one thing, and a great thing...and bowtie is you keen rhyme, 'tis sweet in tone...you wrote a good 'un, again! bubba. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 09/17/09 at 04:40 PM Boy, did you ever recycle! This is great. I have to admit, I do love a poem with a rhythm that works and an unforced rhyme. Thanks for sharing! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/17/09 at 06:35 PM I love poetry from something we stumble upon. It feels so hopeful in its speaking. Your thoughts bloom here as freely as the flowers, and the images are as beautiful. Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Joe David on 09/17/09 at 09:38 PM Absolutely delectable! I love the sound of it. It's light and cheerful and lifts my soul. Puts me in mind of a little girl skipping down a country lane. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/09 at 04:18 AM Fine story telling of a simple discovery. Your rhyme is smooth like silk, and there are many revivals in this one. (perhaps "pedals" ought to be "petals"?) I enjoyed stanza 3 very much, and the lilt to that last stanza is outstanding. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/18/09 at 12:28 PM Excellent piece Glenn, excellent! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/19/09 at 02:57 AM Taking a picture in time and writing about that pause is what poetry is all about.
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| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/20/09 at 10:53 AM you got such lovely rhythms metaphors going on here, Glenn. I love that you make no distinction, place no barriers betwixt the beauty of nature and man/poet. |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/20/09 at 11:46 PM I aobsolutely love how this rolls off of my tongue |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 09/22/09 at 01:43 AM this is just too much fun! awesome! |
