by William Brunk

Veins lust romance
In Spring's warm relapse
I come to exist


Posted on 09/10/2009
Copyright © 2024 William Brunk

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/20/09 at 02:44 AM

i dig that... condensed.... like a connesiour of art..

Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/23/09 at 08:41 PM

"Veins lust" - brilliant. You thrust me into a story in three short lines. Wondering toward that exit...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/07/09 at 03:01 AM

Kind of a reawakening in this that has a quiet, steady power. Cool.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/16/09 at 12:42 AM

Reproduction explained in simplist terms! Almost as brief as the Bible talking about someone sleeping with another and a child was born. But you write it very poetically!

Posted by Christine Thibeault on 01/27/10 at 10:43 PM


Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/03/11 at 11:07 PM

Beautiful and passionate. Short yet so full of imagery and senses. Very well done.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/10/14 at 04:16 AM

"Spring's warm relapse" Holy crap, how did I miss this?

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/26/15 at 12:40 PM

a short poem that leaps tall buildings in a single bound.

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