| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 09/20/09 at 02:44 AM i dig that... condensed.... like a connesiour of art.. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/23/09 at 08:41 PM "Veins lust" - brilliant. You thrust me into a story in three short lines. Wondering toward that exit... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/07/09 at 03:01 AM Kind of a reawakening in this that has a quiet, steady power. Cool. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/16/09 at 12:42 AM Reproduction explained in simplist terms! Almost as brief as the Bible talking about someone sleeping with another and a child was born. But you write it very poetically! |
| Posted by Christine Thibeault on 01/27/10 at 10:43 PM ~Wonderful |
| Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/03/11 at 11:07 PM Beautiful and passionate. Short yet so full of imagery and senses. Very well done. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/10/14 at 04:16 AM "Spring's warm relapse" Holy crap, how did I miss this? |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/26/15 at 12:40 PM a short poem that leaps tall buildings in a single bound. |
