| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/28/08 at 03:06 AM Ha. Freaking brilliant. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/29/08 at 12:41 PM Bright seasonal changes of many hues! You've in this paid your poetry dues! |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 12/02/08 at 02:42 AM I think you should start a makeup line. ;o) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/02/08 at 04:41 PM This was wonderful! I love a poet's pigment to colour the world... Great stuff Dave. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/09/08 at 11:16 PM this is good enough to make shell silverstein proud! |
| Posted by James Zealy on 03/03/09 at 06:59 PM You are entertaining and introspective |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/13/09 at 05:06 PM You dial a big smile and your dawn quells my yawn. It seems to me this out to be put to music. Reminds me of an old Neil Diamond tune the title of which now escapes me, but your's is much more clever and fun. |
| Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 11/23/10 at 01:34 PM Its strange, my friend...I read your stuff and I think to myslef, "Did I write that?"
Are we long lost twins? |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/23/13 at 01:10 PM How did I miss this! This is a great read-aloud romp. Thanks, Dave, and congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/27/13 at 08:26 PM Nice to finally weigh in here. What a fun poem! Beat and imagery all superbly mixed together. Thanks for sharing this!! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/29/13 at 04:34 PM Hey, Hey! What can Isay that tops what others have said! Brillinat! |
| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 06/01/13 at 10:26 PM Your talent for the nonchalantly effervescent is readily apparent. I am enviously green. |
