| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/14/07 at 01:33 AM Yea, but watch out for them poets! (I like the poem) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/14/07 at 01:59 AM Love this! I looked long into that empty cup and wished... and found him tipped with silver hair and beard and magic in his fingertips, a bard of soul, ravisher and tender. He fills my cup and heats the handle too. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/14/07 at 03:37 AM Maria, yes..you have looked into my mind and written what you didn't know was there. The 3rd stanza I like especially, since there appears to be many of those liars out there. I love it!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 05/14/07 at 05:53 AM I'll take a glass of that, Maria! :) Great use of scattered rhymes. |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 05/14/07 at 08:54 PM kinky. |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 11/27/07 at 10:28 AM Very Nice congrats on POTD |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/27/07 at 11:51 AM Still enjoying this one. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/27/07 at 04:52 PM Congratulations on POTD and you can fill my cup anytime. This was really great. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/27/07 at 07:19 PM Most enjoyable POTD! Clever word play with a smart rhyme. Thank you! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/27/07 at 09:39 PM Anyone could guess that I would LOVE your poem, and it sums up my feelings, exactly. You have put it so perfectly, with such loving language and images... I should frame your poem and put it over our (real weekly) Thursday night poets' table when I serve the "poets to the moon" and in my (dream fantasy) poem by poem "cottage in the woods"...too. |
| Posted by Gira Bryant on 11/27/07 at 10:49 PM Not only do I love this, but it was written on my birthday. :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/19/08 at 02:31 PM Love the positive message...and reinforcement here Maria. Glad I got to finlly read it. Kudos! :o) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/23/10 at 02:14 AM love this from start to finish!!! |
| Posted by JJ Johnson on 06/18/10 at 03:05 AM What poet would not love to be in your cup? Oustanding imagery and flow. This would get ovations at open mics, not to mention requests or dates.... |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 03/26/12 at 02:27 AM I don't know how I didnt read this gem before. I favourited this, I LOVE this poem |
