|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/14/07 at 01:33 AM|
Yea, but watch out for them poets! (I like the poem)
|Posted by A. Paige White on 05/14/07 at 01:59 AM|
Love this! I looked long into that empty cup and wished... and found him tipped with silver hair and beard and magic in his fingertips, a bard of soul, ravisher and tender. He fills my cup and heats the handle too.
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/14/07 at 03:37 AM|
Maria, yes..you have looked into my mind and written what you didn't know was there. The 3rd stanza I like especially, since there appears to be many of those liars out there. I love it!
|Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 05/14/07 at 05:53 AM|
I'll take a glass of that, Maria! :) Great use of scattered rhymes.
|Posted by Jared Fladeland on 05/14/07 at 08:54 PM|
|Posted by Charles M Harrison on 11/27/07 at 10:28 AM|
Very Nice congrats on POTD
|Posted by A. Paige White on 11/27/07 at 11:51 AM|
Still enjoying this one. Congrats on POTD!
|Posted by George Hoerner on 11/27/07 at 04:52 PM|
Congratulations on POTD and you can fill my cup anytime. This was really great.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/27/07 at 07:19 PM|
Most enjoyable POTD! Clever word play with a smart rhyme. Thank you!
|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/27/07 at 09:39 PM|
Anyone could guess that I would LOVE your poem, and it sums up my feelings, exactly. You have put it so perfectly, with such loving language and images... I should frame your poem and put it over our (real weekly) Thursday night poets' table when I serve the "poets to the moon" and in my (dream fantasy) poem by poem "cottage in the woods"...too.
|Posted by Gira Bryant on 11/27/07 at 10:49 PM|
Not only do I love this, but it was written on my birthday. :)
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/19/08 at 02:31 PM|
Love the positive message...and reinforcement here Maria. Glad I got to finlly read it. Kudos! :o)
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/23/10 at 02:14 AM|
love this from start to finish!!!
|Posted by JJ Johnson on 06/18/10 at 03:05 AM|
What poet would not love to be in your cup? Oustanding imagery and flow. This would get ovations at open mics, not to mention requests or dates....
|Posted by Shannon McEwen on 03/26/12 at 02:27 AM|
I don't know how I didnt read this gem before. I favourited this, I LOVE this poem