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friend

by Elizabeth Jill





Your sun pulls the day

out of its sleeve and wraps it

around my shoulders.





08/12/2006

Posted on 08/14/2006
Copyright © 2024 Elizabeth Jill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/14/06 at 02:23 AM

De - light - ful!!!

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 08/14/06 at 04:36 AM

what a delicate image. moving. sweet, comforting light. a loving tribute. PK

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/14/06 at 05:25 AM

Hi Jill. The beauty here is not in the words of this friendship, but meanings. You've seemingly bottled a bit of the rainbow here. Poetically well done.

Posted by CM Bauer on 08/14/06 at 06:08 AM

short, lovely and just brimming with beauty...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/14/06 at 04:22 PM

Nice...and indeed warming. Touché!

Posted by Mara Meade on 08/15/06 at 06:59 PM

This is precious and gentle. Brother Sun steps down for a moment to let a Sister speak...

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/16/06 at 12:18 PM

Fresh sharp enchanting, like the smell of a lilly of the valley, simply perfect. Favorite bound.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/16/06 at 02:17 PM

Hey Jill! Way to go on hitting No. 1. Congrats!

Posted by Michael Faraday on 08/16/06 at 03:48 PM

succinctly said and all that jazz! Well done. m

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/16/06 at 11:02 PM

mmmm cosy, don't want to get out of bed :)

Posted by Christel Crews on 08/17/06 at 01:31 AM

oh, how beautiful! everyone needs a friend like this :) i hope you're doing well!!!

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 08/17/06 at 03:00 AM

I needed this poem today, my friend. Yes, yes, yes ... so true and so everlastingly full of possibilities and smiles. *hugs*

Posted by Jim Benz on 08/18/06 at 06:33 PM

I haven't read or commented on a poem at pathetic in ages, but this one was truly beautiful. I love this little piece Jill. nice job.

Posted by Patricia J Reed on 08/19/06 at 05:17 AM

this is so warming patti

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/28/06 at 10:39 PM

You've described a friend perfectly. Good friends are priceless.
~Chelle~

Posted by Patricia J Reed on 09/17/06 at 08:03 AM

i just wanted to comment again! i love this poem! it's so simple and makes me smile everytime i read it.

Posted by Laura Doom on 10/06/06 at 11:39 AM

Jill absorb form and radiate - aura loomed shadowskate.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/05/07 at 04:28 PM

Hi Elizabeth, Great write. Sometimes we need the warmth from the sun and that xtra little hug, specially when we're blue.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/05/07 at 04:29 PM

It's lovely.

Posted by Alisa Js on 10/17/07 at 08:33 PM

fabulous imagery, emotionally and visually.. aloha

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/17/09 at 04:19 PM

Amazing how you can say so much with few words. Beautifully

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/17/09 at 11:46 AM

how in tarnation can I not add this to my faves? Leo roars approval.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/25/13 at 03:05 PM

My day is brighter seeing this as POTD!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/26/13 at 12:29 AM

beyond beautiful. the lightembrace of this melts the snow in my day...

Posted by A. Paige White on 02/26/13 at 12:58 AM

It's lovely to find myself wearing this cloak tighter as it's unveiled in the reading. Congrats on POTD! It's a beautiful haiku on a chilly day, but one I was blessed to share with beloved friends just like this describes.

Posted by George Hoerner on 08/08/17 at 01:06 AM

What else is there to say lady! Very nicely done.

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