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Casting

by Glenn Currier

Your walk toward the platform
seemed almost casual,
swinging your arms with ease
climbing the ramp to the stage
with little effort,
having grown to the height
of a young man full of promise.

I can remember
that cold rainy November night
when your mom and dad arrived,
you wrapped in a small blanket.

I can remember
the first moment I saw you
inside our pop-up camper.
You slept
the sniffled-breathing baby sleep
that you would eventually
master like no other I have seen.

Impressed with your parents'
confidence in your three-month life
to take you camping
in the simi-wild of the state park,
I delighted at your squirming
little pink presence.

I remember
our car trips
and the amazing force of your lungs
projecting a joyful noise
causing me to wish for earplugs.

I remember
the way you drew
the enormous love of family
sparked by your spritely spirit.
Unmistakable in your presence
you made your mark
in our hearts.

I remember
our early risings
to leave the camper
for the banks of Lake Whitney
hoping the Sandies
would mistake our lures for breakfast.

I remember
your tears the first time you bled
from handling the Kastmaster
and my assurance
that you had not fished
if you didn't hook yourself at least once
and your sniffling protest:
"But I am just a little child."
You stopped crying
when I told you it was ok to cry.
Then you asked me to help you cast again.

It was not long
before you learned to cast
yourself out into the world
and you were hooked on wonder
eager to learn.

You became a learner
and with confidence
you exercised your mind
and became a superb young athlete.

As surely as you needed
our attention and our time
for your first two decades,
you now again cast out,
your tackle-new talents and gifts.

With keen eagerness
we await the bounty
of your catch.

08/06/2006

Author's Note: Dedicated to my nephew Jeremy Kowis upon his graduation from Texas A & M Corpus Christi - August 5, 2006

Posted on 08/07/2006
Copyright © 2025 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/10/06 at 12:39 AM

Really both a very warmly nostalgic and biographical poem with great charm and vitality. A great tribute to your nephew.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/10/06 at 04:21 AM

Fine, fine memories of this young man's life in relation to your family. The last two stanzas finish this is good form.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/10/06 at 12:29 PM

a nostalgic and loving tribute that's a pleasure to read. I like how the fishing cast its way into your memory at the graduation time. Beautiful.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/10/06 at 02:27 PM

Magical memories...past...and new ones to be made in future endeavours. Superbly presented Glenn...clear and relateable!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/11/06 at 09:20 PM

This poem tugs the heart and has got me bawling my eyes out. The sort of bawl, I didn't know I had, left in me. Thanks be to you Glenn.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/16/06 at 02:00 PM

...glenn, meman, mepal, what a delightful tribute to LIFE ala nephew...every line i was reading was like a floating raft of smiles held up by bubbles of kid-ness annnnd me with a new grandson, i can't wait til i start getting to do "stuff" like this...well done poetics, myman, wellll done...peace, chaz

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