| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/22/05 at 04:55 PM LOL! Just add clouds? Insightful take on our timeless companion Glenn. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/23/05 at 11:34 PM Elusive and playful... excellent images for the solstice. :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/27/05 at 01:28 AM Yes, soft, wispy and coy. Nice to sense. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/06/05 at 09:21 PM although it was coy, I never witnessed a moon sans experiencing joy. and joy is what this poem beams. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/04/06 at 03:57 AM I liked reading both versions of this haiku. I really liked the photo behind the graphic version, but I do like the verse without the "full soft" - something very complete about the phrase "melancholy moon" - nicely done. |
