| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 08:39 PM ...yeah, ashok...i "see" the invisible too!! ya know if you have to explain it, it can't be understood nahahahaha, but it does permeate, it is un-seen (physically) but man-o-man can it EVER be felt orrrr also [sadly] can be UN-felt...something as heavy and real and needed [by us humans]... well said in a few lines...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/14/05 at 03:00 AM a beautiful poem, Ashok, reflective of it's senmtiment.. ;) |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/14/05 at 08:20 AM Ashok, I enjoyed reading this. For me, this is where it all begins, whether toward myself or others. Wonderful!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/14/05 at 04:49 PM I like the positive message and hopefullness of this expression. Thanks for sharing Ashok. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/14/05 at 06:57 PM Though your invisible world is 'out there', the intention is for it to embrace, and so become universally 'in here'. Yes, positive & hopeful. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 04/15/05 at 02:05 PM Ashok, I like the thought of the world "Expanding like a tree" and being referred to as "Love." It's so refreshing to see life in a positive light. Your poem reminds me of one I just wrote recently called "Your World." Thanks for the great read. ~~ Kyle Anne |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/15/05 at 03:04 PM One can take the "LOVE" or leave it...and still the beauty of your words pierce through the heart to swell its throbs of longing. It is the infinite 'contraction' and 'retraction' that completes the notion, this world which permeates all that is 'within' and 'without' alone can bring happiness, joy, and fulfillment. This world alone can be filled with intention and selfless ACTION, for it is here that hope sustains its meaning, and life ceases to be an obstacle in our endeavor to LIVE. An incredibly moving poem you have here Ashok. Simply stunning. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/15/05 at 03:04 PM Oh yes, and it's also my suggestion for POTD. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/15/05 at 03:05 PM Excuse me, I meant "infinite 'expansion' and 'retraction'" hahahaha :-) |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/15/05 at 03:06 PM or uhm...'expansion' and 'contraction' - Oh you know what I mean! hahahahaha I'm laughing so hard at myself ;-) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/15/05 at 11:46 PM I addressed this intricate poem like a riddle only because the it was the only way I could make sense of the title. This is the way I see you, my friend, I too AM that word. Fun stuff!
pe4ce...
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/05 at 12:54 AM You succinctly catch the essence of "the unseen" which is more powerful, more pervasive than that which is seen. I sincerely believe that it is what holds the cosmos (or whatever one wants to call it) together. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/16/05 at 01:53 AM you make the invisible beautiful. a favorite of mine.
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| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/22/05 at 07:12 AM Congratulations on POTD! This poem is well-deserving of this honor. I still love it as much as I did when I first read it. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/22/05 at 02:51 PM You are a choir singing the metaphysics of love. Beautiful, Ashok. Thanks for another fragrant flower from India. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/22/05 at 04:30 PM Congrat's on POTD, my friend. It's well deserved :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/01/05 at 02:06 PM what better word? who better to say it thus? |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 04/06/08 at 01:19 AM Hoorah for LOVE. This was a fresh way to express your poetic Self.
Bravo! |
