|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/27/04 at 02:53 PM|
'I found my voice once again'.. this poetic expression does echo these feeling.Yes, its your voice. so assertively expressing this realization that 'now I could finally move on'
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/27/04 at 03:08 PM|
A refreshing way of saying, "Time heals all wounds!" You say it most engagingly.
|Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/27/04 at 03:20 PM|
ah, such freedom when the yearning stops! And time for new energy and growth. Been there, got the t-shirt!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/27/04 at 04:13 PM|
The shortness of this piece and its subtle rhyming help to convey that confidence of survival. Pleasant read Kate that I can apply to my own life in various ways, both past and present. Thanks.
|Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/27/04 at 06:01 PM|
what a wonderfully refreshing declaration of independence! Bravo, Kate!
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/28/04 at 01:48 AM|
I agree with everyone.. this is a fantastic statement of self-dependence and freedom! Excellent!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/28/04 at 11:20 AM|
knowing the spiritness of you firsthand, I can well say, the phoenix ain't got nothing on you, as far as new beginnings go and how does the song go, when they begin the beguine-------
|Posted by JD Clay on 10/28/04 at 01:17 PM|
Ah! Saying goodbye to the past seems like such sweet sorrow, until we discover that it no longer serves us. This is one reason why I no longer pack a camera. Good stuff, Kate.
|Posted by David R Spellman on 10/31/04 at 01:37 PM|
Bravo to you! A beautiful expression of moving on and getting on with our lives after the heart-wrenching pain of loss slowly diminishes with time. You go girl!!! [;0)~
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/08/04 at 03:59 AM|
You do make meaningful in a different way the truism: "Better to have love and lost... " Your poem speaks eloquently the possibility of resurrection and a new day while honoring the losses and pain of love and life. Delicate and engaging piece, Kate. Thanks.