Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/18/03 at 07:34 PM Thank you for sharing this important entry at this time. I pray it's not true for you, and yours, but must be acknowledged for those of such terrible suffering. |
Posted by Kate Donovan on 12/18/03 at 07:37 PM very stirring, this touches the reader deeply. great job. |
Posted by Mara Meade on 12/19/03 at 08:00 PM from a mother's heart... this is haunting and tragic. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/19/03 at 11:50 PM Well written poem Jane. My heart goes out to all
that serve....Charlie |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/20/03 at 10:24 PM Your poem evokes a pervasive sadness over loss, but it is mixed with pride and tenderness. Two sentiments much needed now. Blessings to you, my dear. |
Posted by Christel Crews on 12/23/03 at 02:29 AM jane, we've been watching Band of Brothers this week and its a chilling reminder of what our soldiers are actually going through over seas. this is a wonderful reminder. i am ever so thankful for the men who are sacrificing more than their time for this country. this piece is chilling and full of a good reminder... |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/08/04 at 03:32 PM A beautiful tribute. Timely and poignant. |
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 04/08/08 at 01:54 PM Stunning. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/08/08 at 02:57 PM An important POTD. A fine tribute to those lost. |
Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 04/08/08 at 04:44 PM My brother, baby brother is out there as we speak.
This eloquently and precisely brought tears to my eyes and a prayer to my heart.
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Posted by Amy Wustrin on 04/08/08 at 07:03 PM thank you for sharing this. +favs |
Posted by Mike Loftis on 04/08/08 at 07:13 PM Very well done Jane. This poem is a great choice for POTD. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/08/08 at 08:15 PM My daughter is in the navy, and I pray for her every day, that her (NOR ANY OTHER) lifeless body would not be the price paid for agendas not in the world's best interests! GREAT pick for POTD, and sadly, still a very well-timed piece. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/09/08 at 12:44 AM Congratulations for poem of the day Jane....CharMin |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/09/08 at 01:57 PM ...jane, i am wowed by your loving gesture in such a stoic manner, my hat's over my heart for your son and i bow to you for such respect. are we worthy?, well, your son is. charlie |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/09/08 at 07:11 PM Wow! Great to see this as No 1 Jane so long after it was posted and still quite relevant today with Iraq and Afghanistan. Congrats! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/10/08 at 12:15 AM Missed it as POTD. A very worthy one! |
Posted by JD Clay on 04/12/08 at 06:07 PM These are words scripted in your own blood, mixed with the tears of a sorrowful pen. Peace, dearest Jane. Blow taps!
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Posted by Tony Whitaker on 07/14/14 at 05:18 PM This is a masterpiece!!! |