| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/14/03 at 03:04 PM I think we do take wings charged with the energies refined and powerful. Subtle and beautiful. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/14/03 at 04:23 PM wow, great merger of human + nature, i love how this goes closer until it melds.. just lovely |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/14/03 at 06:29 PM Beautiful imagery, evocative symbolism! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/15/03 at 04:33 PM Romantic and lovely.. this is one of the prettiest haikus I've ever read! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/15/03 at 06:44 PM There is not only beauty but sensuality in this... how you manage to pack so much into three short lines.. is amazing! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 05/15/03 at 11:19 PM This absolutely delighted me! I applaud! I applaud! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/16/03 at 03:02 AM Nice Dave...Charlie |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/16/03 at 10:00 PM Brilliant and beautiful image. Lovely piece of work. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/18/03 at 10:15 PM Wonderfully vivid and melodic for such a short poem. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/08/04 at 03:41 AM Oh man, what a GREAT haiku! The meanings for both our species are a delight for the eyes and the heart. Congratulations on this wonderful poem. It is going on my favorites. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/16 at 11:11 PM Great haiku. Congrats on POTD! Perfect timing with all the robins here now for spring. Thanks! |
