| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 05/11/03 at 12:39 PM pretty little writing, sweet the way cotton candy is, capturing emotions about as ephemeral. nice. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/11/03 at 03:08 PM This is vibrating with beautiful emotions. Positive and full of finer energies. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/11/03 at 07:07 PM Did you, Rommel, really write this?? LOL :p:p
This is just so..sensually sweet and beautiful !! Wonderful buddy :) |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 05/12/03 at 02:58 AM ohhh I like this a lot...every line got better and better! Really cool!!! :) :) :) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/12/03 at 01:46 PM Beautiful and magical.. great read, Rommel :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/12/03 at 04:35 PM Very nice...waltzes effortlessly through the mind. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/12/03 at 11:39 PM This line is amazing: "Petal breaths of hair" Four words, but describes so much |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/14/03 at 02:43 AM Beautifully romantic! Almost reminiscent of "Song of Soloman". |
| Posted by Matt Forget on 05/15/03 at 04:24 PM Sweet and soft. I can definitely feel the softness...it's like.....soft...nice job! :) |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 05/15/03 at 05:51 PM Awwwwww, what a sweet dedication. Well done. |
| Posted by Richard D Frederick on 05/16/03 at 05:31 AM enjoyable, rarely is this subject portrayed so well. |
| Posted by Alastre Zidler on 05/23/03 at 03:10 PM Innocent and delicately sensual. I picture two figures embraced in pure white light. Wonderful work, if this poem were something you could put on your desk, it would be made of porcelain. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/21/03 at 05:45 AM Hi Rommel,
Just finish your poem, lovely. Love is wonderful if ya have the right person. keep up the good works, Bud. Jean
Oh yes, Red & Gal say Hi too. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/01/03 at 02:55 PM Touching and fragile. Porcelain fingers... great image conjured on that one. Well done! |
