| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/09/03 at 05:41 AM yes- the en-light-enment that the soul hopes for so dearly when in that space of inner darkness. very well expressed. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/09/03 at 08:24 AM yes, yes. we need to break thru and be enlightened from our own thoughts and beliefs |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 05/09/03 at 10:51 AM a very well expressed concept :) |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/09/03 at 12:08 PM Loved the imagery in this one Anne! Great title too...... |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/09/03 at 04:18 PM A deep, meaningful poem Anne...great job!...MUHAS!! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/09/03 at 09:05 PM Excellent continuation of your depression series Anne. You must publish these someday in a chap book. I'm sure others would benefit, including those living and supporting under similar circumstances. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 05/09/03 at 09:55 PM Threads of thoughts no longer cobwebs but vastly wrapped... oh, this is so descriptive, Anne. Like Arthur, I sense a darkness or helplessness in it... and know that feeling all too well. Very very well said, dear one. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/10/03 at 05:44 PM Wow, I love the metaphor of mummification. As if someone feels they CANT do anything about it because they are bound. And then the end... stating they CAN break through. Great message |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/11/03 at 04:11 AM Yes, BE in order to SEE WHAT IS. SEE in order to BE. ONE within. ONE without. But as you said this needs self to grow. And BEING and growing are complementary, as SEEING and BEING is. When you grow, you attain the capacity to know/see/be and when you know/be/see you attain the capacity to grow. Beautiful Anne. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/11/03 at 07:29 PM Moving from knowing to being is no easy transition. Acknowledgement is only the beginning. Your dichotomous poem is however a giant leap forward. I hope the ride is as enjoyable for you as your tales are for us.
Peace... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/19/03 at 04:59 AM Very truthful expression. That knowledge of nonexistence. Very well put! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/13/03 at 12:13 PM no use to wonder Anne, you have indeed broken through and are. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/10/03 at 10:12 PM Excellent theme and message, gives good things to think about. :) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/25/03 at 06:19 AM beautiful and perfectly executed... i shall remember this poem in my dark days... thank you... blessings |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 07/16/05 at 04:22 PM Inspiring words, Anne...:) |
