| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/10/03 at 12:24 AM wonderful!! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/10/03 at 02:51 AM Wow! Talk about passionate poetry, this one is overflowing. Nice work. Vimal.
Peace... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/10/03 at 10:53 AM A Mona Lisa of a poem and as raptuous. |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 04/10/03 at 05:16 PM Nothing like a little romance. :} Great poem. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 04/10/03 at 09:01 PM explodes with love and feeling!...keep it up, Vimal!
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| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/11/03 at 01:04 AM beautiful:) |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/11/03 at 02:17 AM a gentle poem worthy of the Garden of Eden. this is such a refreshing love poem from the heart |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/12/03 at 02:45 AM How beautiful and romantic, passionate ballet, so graceful. truly moving poem :-) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/18/03 at 04:04 AM What a lovely tribute to your love. I like the images you use, Mariana's Trench, Mt. Everest, Davincci's canvas. You take me for a magic carpet ride leaving a trail of hearts. Good work, Vimal.
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/02/03 at 02:34 PM Stirring romantic, love with an exclamation point, tenderly passionate. |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 07/27/03 at 09:50 PM Amazing...I am speechless...so beautiful and passionate... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/31/03 at 04:40 PM Don't know how I missed this one! Excellent use (original) of Mount Everest and Marianas Trench to get the message across. I hope you shared this with whoever inspired you to write it. Definietely worth a lifetime's kisses and hugs. :o) |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/20/03 at 07:38 PM Stunning! Beautiful, ethereal images. I love the way each stanza brings its own formula. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/25/03 at 05:17 AM Truly great love poem Vimal.....Charlie |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/15/03 at 11:02 AM I just wanted to say how beautiful these words remain still, upon the second reading. |
| Posted by Becca Morton on 01/10/06 at 05:17 AM this is so passionate. so beautiful. Keep it up. |
