Treasured Secrets

by Anne Engelen


Life’s little secrets

Stocked away behind closed doors

Trigger curiousity


Do you hold the key

To the entrance of my heart

My life’s treasure room


D’you care to find out

Ready to travel with me

This journey for two


Mystic’ly unveil

My deeper inner yearnings

Discover love’s secrets


Posted on 03/14/2003
Copyright © 2021 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/14/03 at 07:17 PM

very nicely done, Anne! Glad your muse is back!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/14/03 at 08:34 PM

Sweet post Vallentine Day mixture, Anne. :o)

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/14/03 at 09:44 PM

Nice to see you musing over matters of the heart..such a wonderful theme! - Very nice AnnE! - RCat

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 03/14/03 at 11:25 PM

Anne...this is a beautiful journey that I will take with you anytime!..;)

Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 02:15 PM

A warm and tender renga Anne. Nicely done. Peace...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/16/03 at 03:22 AM

'deeper inner yearnings', well, this gives this piece yet another dimension. Beautiful piece.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/18/03 at 06:54 PM

I'm glad you shared this secret treasure w/us :) a fine haiku!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/28/03 at 02:39 PM

that yearning to discover secrets and yet the deeper yearning to keep them hushed.

Posted by Don Coffman on 10/10/03 at 10:10 PM

Lovely poem. I'm a fan of using haiku's strung together as verses (although for some reason I have yet to do it myself). *smile*

Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/03 at 03:49 PM

I too feel the ambivalence here, wanting another to want into my heart but also wanting to protect it from a coarse incursion. Quite lovely, my dear.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/01/03 at 08:46 PM

Well done Anne....Charlie

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/13/03 at 11:55 PM

thanks for opening us up to your soul, here, Anne, in tender tidbits

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