|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/14/03 at 07:17 PM|
very nicely done, Anne! Glad your muse is back!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/14/03 at 08:34 PM|
Sweet post Vallentine Day mixture, Anne. :o)
|Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/14/03 at 09:44 PM|
Nice to see you musing over matters of the heart..such a wonderful theme! - Very nice AnnE! - RCat
|Posted by Charles J Hannan on 03/14/03 at 11:25 PM|
Anne...this is a beautiful journey that I will take with you anytime!..;)
|Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 02:15 PM|
A warm and tender renga Anne. Nicely done.
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/16/03 at 03:22 AM|
'deeper inner yearnings', well, this gives this piece yet another dimension. Beautiful piece.
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/18/03 at 06:54 PM|
I'm glad you shared this secret treasure w/us :) a fine haiku!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/28/03 at 02:39 PM|
that yearning to discover secrets and yet the deeper yearning to keep them hushed.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 10/10/03 at 10:10 PM|
Lovely poem. I'm a fan of using haiku's strung together as verses (although for some reason I have yet to do it myself). *smile*
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/03 at 03:49 PM|
I too feel the ambivalence here, wanting another to want into my heart but also wanting to protect it from a coarse incursion. Quite lovely, my dear.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/01/03 at 08:46 PM|
Well done Anne....Charlie
|Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/13/03 at 11:55 PM|
thanks for opening us up to your soul, here, Anne, in tender tidbits