| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/14/03 at 07:17 PM very nicely done, Anne! Glad your muse is back! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/14/03 at 08:34 PM Sweet post Vallentine Day mixture, Anne. :o) |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/14/03 at 09:44 PM Nice to see you musing over matters of the heart..such a wonderful theme! - Very nice AnnE! - RCat |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 03/14/03 at 11:25 PM Anne...this is a beautiful journey that I will take with you anytime!..;) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 02:15 PM A warm and tender renga Anne. Nicely done.
Peace... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/16/03 at 03:22 AM 'deeper inner yearnings', well, this gives this piece yet another dimension. Beautiful piece.
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| Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/18/03 at 06:54 PM I'm glad you shared this secret treasure w/us :) a fine haiku! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/28/03 at 02:39 PM that yearning to discover secrets and yet the deeper yearning to keep them hushed. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/10/03 at 10:10 PM Lovely poem. I'm a fan of using haiku's strung together as verses (although for some reason I have yet to do it myself). *smile* |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/03 at 03:49 PM I too feel the ambivalence here, wanting another to want into my heart but also wanting to protect it from a coarse incursion. Quite lovely, my dear. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/01/03 at 08:46 PM Well done Anne....Charlie |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/13/03 at 11:55 PM thanks for opening us up to your soul, here, Anne, in tender tidbits |
