| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/27/02 at 12:51 AM Haunting indeed! The rhyme connected with the words and meanings are etherial and thought-provoking. Your poem forces me to go within for MY meaning as I imagine yours... a high compliment to your creativity. This is brilliant. Thank goodness for this haunting and your decision to share it. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/27/02 at 04:26 PM makes sense to me...I love it... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/27/02 at 06:55 PM It is definitely a disturbed and disturbing piece, Kris. I'd say you were successful in mirroring the text off the title. Hope writing and posting it helped clear your mind. :o) |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 12/31/02 at 02:45 PM It's scarey to admit it, but I get it. YIKES! ;)
Excellent description of dealing with inner voices. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/31/02 at 07:02 PM Gives me the chills! All of your poems are just so amazing! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/08/03 at 02:11 PM Now there is a mind well traveled. I love your style Kristine, every line a vision, every poem a breakthrough.
Peace... |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/22/03 at 09:30 AM do you know smeagol? you two can have fun together. LOL. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/18/03 at 03:21 AM Haunting discussion between two different streams of thought! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/29/03 at 05:28 AM Any re-visit to your library is like seconds at the smorgesboard and one can only wonder what your delicious mind will serve up next. A veritable psyche banquet. This one a delicacy.
Peace... |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/22/03 at 01:27 PM like a nightmare... you weave a tale that sticks long after... i enjoy your writing style... very intriguing... blessings... |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/25/03 at 04:55 PM i'm just waiting for the other voice to start quoting scripture. *grins* this is priceless, my friend. how the insanity eats at us all. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/30/03 at 09:05 PM Me thinks, not only Edgar Allen Poe, but Shaspeare must be smiling knowingly at this complex poem. |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 03/01/05 at 01:01 PM 'giving birth to death' this intricate poem mirrors an intricate mind. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/30/07 at 11:41 PM Irony in symmetry. |
