Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Mara Meade on 11/11/02 at 08:51 PM This is a beautiful love poem. I like the way you describe destiny. |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/04/02 at 04:36 PM A wonderful poem Vimal, very beautiful |
Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/07/03 at 12:43 AM "You cascaded into my life/ Like a serene waterfall".. truly touching.. this writing is flowing with grace and wonder.. great poem :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 03:49 AM YEOWZA! Romal. Beyond doubt, truly timeless and excellent response to my challenge. Powerful enough to move any lover across centuries. Wwell done sir!!! |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/01/03 at 07:01 PM So many beautiful images here!!! Incredible poem!! |
Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/13/03 at 12:37 AM oooh yes! as a newly engaged to the love of my life, i really believe in this poem as expressing it all. way to go refreshing those 3 words with such gorgeous imagery! |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/17/03 at 11:15 AM such power in three little words and that one word in the middle ignites the two that serve as bookends. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/05/03 at 01:50 AM Magnificent update Romel. Always nice to see a poem keep getting better and better. Hat's off to ya! |