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THREE LITTLE WORDS (I Love You) (Romantic/Inspirational)

by Vimal Rony


Gliding on the wings of love
Waiting we were
Until the winds of destiny
Brought us together
To evoke the truest love
In each other

Gliding on the wings of love
Guided by the current of destiny
You cascaded into my life
Like a serene waterfall
Painting my life with
The most beautiful scenery

Gliding on the wings of love
Suspended we were
Until the great puppeter Up Above
Pulled the strings that
Brought us together
To the most divine
Rendevouz of our love

Gliding on the wings of love
Adorned by the priceless jewel
Of warmth and caring
You crowned my life
By becoming the answer
To the quest of my existence

And gliding together on the wings of love
I promise to take care of you
While the emotions that gather
Inside the most passionate
And loving part of my heart
touched by no one before,
but only your pure and true love
Culminate to form
The most meaningful
three little words
I LOVE YOU

08/18/2002

Posted on 08/18/2002
Copyright © 2024 Vimal Rony

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mara Meade on 11/11/02 at 08:51 PM

This is a beautiful love poem. I like the way you describe destiny.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/04/02 at 04:36 PM

A wonderful poem Vimal, very beautiful

Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/07/03 at 12:43 AM

"You cascaded into my life/ Like a serene waterfall".. truly touching.. this writing is flowing with grace and wonder.. great poem :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 03:49 AM

YEOWZA! Romal. Beyond doubt, truly timeless and excellent response to my challenge. Powerful enough to move any lover across centuries. Wwell done sir!!!

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/01/03 at 07:01 PM

So many beautiful images here!!! Incredible poem!!

Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/13/03 at 12:37 AM

oooh yes! as a newly engaged to the love of my life, i really believe in this poem as expressing it all. way to go refreshing those 3 words with such gorgeous imagery!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/17/03 at 11:15 AM

such power in three little words and that one word in the middle ignites the two that serve as bookends.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/05/03 at 01:50 AM

Magnificent update Romel. Always nice to see a poem keep getting better and better. Hat's off to ya!

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