| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 03/29/03 at 02:23 AM Great observance of the trilogy of meditation awareness, and its challenge perhaps... |
| Posted by Martini Koy on 04/19/03 at 08:43 AM i felt an orgasmic tingle on my nape after reading this. it's the same thing i feel everytime i get a certain realization of something. nicely done, ashok. short and powerful. =) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/30/03 at 01:21 PM perfect powerful little mantra... blessings :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/19/03 at 06:56 PM The next time I walk, which will be in about 5 minutes, I hope I can do so in the 3rd stance. I know, your poem will make my evening walks around the neighborhood much more meaingful. Great poem, my friend. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 01/25/04 at 11:17 PM I really like the simple form of the poem and the ease with which the reader will understand the transition from one stance to the next. Of course it is clear to see that the third stance is where we should all be. I am beginning to see you were right about nature being our prison...thanks Ashok, as always, for sharing :-) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/11/04 at 05:42 PM Neat progression/evolution here. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/21/04 at 07:18 PM I would find it difficult to think otherwise, that awareness could do otherwise, but be aware of its own awareness or situation where Creator, creating something, He or She could have no affect on. |
