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Brief Moments in Time

by Kristina Woodhill

She envied the pig weather vane
poised atop its highest hope

just before the miracle


Author's Note: My colleague poet tells me I need to learn to condense and cut out the chaff. Practicing.

Posted on 02/08/2022
Copyright © 2023 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/22 at 01:49 AM

I like this piece, Kristina, for its brevity; leaves enough for the imagination to fill in the blanks. Chaff, interesting word. I've also heard fluff used also to describe excess wordage.

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