Brief Moments in Time
by Kristina Woodhill
She envied the pig weather vane
poised atop its highest hope
just before the miracle
Author's Note: My colleague poet tells me I need to learn to condense and cut out the chaff. Practicing.
Posted on 02/08/2022
Copyright © 2023 Kristina Woodhill
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/22 at 01:49 AM|
I like this piece, Kristina, for its brevity; leaves enough for the imagination to fill in the blanks. Chaff, interesting word. I've also heard fluff used also to describe excess wordage.