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Brief Moments in Time
by Kristina Woodhill
She envied the pig weather vane
poised atop its highest hope
just before the miracle
02/08/2022 Author's Note: My colleague poet tells me I need to learn to condense and cut out the chaff. Practicing.
Posted on 02/08/2022
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/22 at 01:49 AM I like this piece, Kristina, for its brevity; leaves enough for the imagination to fill in the blanks. Chaff, interesting word. I've also heard fluff used also to describe excess wordage. |
| Posted by Johanna May on 03/20/24 at 11:54 PM I can see you seeing this and seeing the poem in this. I need to remove the chaff too. Good advice from your friend. |
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