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Writing is diving

by Glenn Currier

Writing is like jumping into a deep mountain lake
to find some tiny piece of my soul
submerged and floating there
an immersive brooding wistful prayer
or a flight into the blue thin air.

It is a cinematic journey
recording the fruits of noticing
what is right in front of the eyes
and finding what is deeper
unseen underneath.

Writing is looking into an old man’s eyes
and discovering the person there
just as much a spiritual venture
digging toward his center
as a physical sensation.

It is a magical mystery tour
taking the visible threads
in hand and feeling my way
to the roots
or pausing and squeezing the fruit
for its juice.

It is fun
it is a morning run
or an evening rest
pain, joy, and dreams expressed.

Writing is moving, grooving, including
taking a moment in time
exploding it in rhythm and rhyme
finding in the ordinary the sublime.

07/13/2019

Author's Note: I wrote this after reading several poems on HelloPoetry.com including one by John Riley ("Stuck") on writer's block.

Posted on 07/13/2019
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/13/19 at 06:55 PM

Good use of metaphors, Glenn, and easily relateable for any poet worth his/her weight in ink.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/14/19 at 07:21 PM

Glenn, I really enjoyed this line "an immersive brooding wistful prayer" and this "or pausing and squeezing the fruit for its juice." I also really like the idea of writing causing explosions of rhyme and rhythm. Thanks!

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