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Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/26/14 at 02:55 PM *****SUPER NOVA STELLULAR***** |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/28/14 at 03:42 PM Both sensuous and sensual. Some literary analogous allusions thrown in. |
Posted by Steve Michaels on 04/28/14 at 07:37 PM I love love love this poem! I am going to read it out loud to the next woman I break up with! Aardvark Kisses!!!!! What a great phrase!!! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/29/14 at 04:31 PM Delightful - "Living and cantoring it up
In the minarets of our verses
And rhyme
Time after subliminal time" and my favorite phrasing. Nostalgia at its/your best, Philip.
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Posted by Elizabeth Shaw on 04/29/14 at 10:45 PM This is just charming - and what a sculpture you have sir planted here... my oh my ... aardvark I dare say, and with your tongue's lathe no less!!!!!!!!! Nice big wet ones Phil. This is so playful and I'm much in need of playful doing income taxes. Thnx:) |
Posted by George Hoerner on 04/30/14 at 02:49 PM Just great my friend! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/01/14 at 03:38 PM Catchy choice of words and construction moves this whole thing along to its excellent conclusion, Phil. |