|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/26/14 at 02:55 PM|
*****SUPER NOVA STELLULAR*****
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/28/14 at 03:42 PM|
Both sensuous and sensual. Some literary analogous allusions thrown in.
|Posted by Steve Michaels on 04/28/14 at 07:37 PM|
I love love love this poem! I am going to read it out loud to the next woman I break up with! Aardvark Kisses!!!!! What a great phrase!!!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/29/14 at 04:31 PM|
Delightful - "Living and cantoring it up
In the minarets of our verses
Time after subliminal time" and my favorite phrasing. Nostalgia at its/your best, Philip.
|Posted by Elizabeth Shaw on 04/29/14 at 10:45 PM|
This is just charming - and what a sculpture you have sir planted here... my oh my ... aardvark I dare say, and with your tongue's lathe no less!!!!!!!!! Nice big wet ones Phil. This is so playful and I'm much in need of playful doing income taxes. Thnx:)
|Posted by George Hoerner on 04/30/14 at 02:49 PM|
Just great my friend!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/01/14 at 03:38 PM|
Catchy choice of words and construction moves this whole thing along to its excellent conclusion, Phil.