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Prequel

by Chris Sorrenti


restless spirits

inside of me

not developed enough

to come out

the unborn

claw at my womb


© 2012

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01/27/2012

Author's Note: The opening poem to This, That, And A Few Other Things, followed by a second opening piece, amid the chaos.

Posted on 01/27/2012
Copyright © 2021 Chris Sorrenti

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/12 at 08:59 PM

Chris... I had no idea about your "condition." ;)

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 09:07 PM

Wow. I never thought of this sort of twist coming from a male. Such interesting thoughts it provokes. Bravo!!!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/28/12 at 12:04 AM

Hell of a voice.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/28/12 at 05:03 AM

Wow! This really caught me off guard - a good thing when reading a poem. Sparse, revealing, dare I say "pregnant" with meaning. I await the Sequel. Thanks, Chris!

Posted by Lori Blair on 01/31/12 at 09:10 PM

"claw at my womb" ha! Excellent write Chris and at times it was exactly like that for me!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/02/12 at 02:51 AM

A fascinating look at the male's "feminine" side.

Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 02/12/12 at 06:24 AM

Oh yeah! Not bad for a canuk :) Glad you shared!

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