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Prequel
by Chris Sorrenti
restless spirits
inside of me
not developed enough
to come out
the unborn
claw at my womb
© 2012
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01/27/2012
Author's Note: The opening poem to This, That, And A Few Other Things, followed by a second opening piece, amid the chaos.
Posted on 01/27/2012
Copyright © 2024 Chris Sorrenti
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/12 at 08:59 PM Chris... I had no idea about your "condition." ;) |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 09:07 PM Wow. I never thought of this sort of twist coming from a male. Such interesting thoughts it provokes. Bravo!!! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/28/12 at 12:04 AM Hell of a voice. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/28/12 at 05:03 AM Wow! This really caught me off guard - a good thing when reading a poem. Sparse, revealing, dare I say "pregnant" with meaning. I await the Sequel. Thanks, Chris! |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 01/31/12 at 09:10 PM "claw at my womb" ha! Excellent write Chris and at times it was exactly like that for me! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/02/12 at 02:51 AM A fascinating look at the male's "feminine" side. |
| Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 02/12/12 at 06:24 AM Oh yeah! Not bad for a canuk :)
Glad you shared! |
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