Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/26/12 at 07:35 PM ... outstanding..... |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/12 at 09:59 PM It's a crisp, unforgettable image you're painting here. Fantastic work. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/12 at 10:23 PM Really well done lady. |
Posted by Kris Mara on 01/27/12 at 12:38 AM beautifully written and so sincere...it goes right to the heart... |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/27/12 at 04:03 AM this is beautiful and sad |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 04:09 AM You've sooooo described that loss in a way that most of us could not. Thank you for this, for sharing, and for giving this loss a voice. *hugs* |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/14/12 at 01:46 AM Despite being a man, I feel your pain, as you've so poetically described and ascribed. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/14/12 at 10:25 PM I can hear the mournful song this evokes. |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/16/12 at 03:07 PM This is excellent! Powerful stuff indeed. |
Posted by Mo Couts on 09/15/14 at 09:20 PM This is heavy and powerful, as it should be. I cannot fathom how much this weighs to you, but it means a lot to me. So beautifully done. |