|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/26/12 at 07:35 PM|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/12 at 09:59 PM|
It's a crisp, unforgettable image you're painting here. Fantastic work.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/12 at 10:23 PM|
Really well done lady.
|Posted by Kris Mara on 01/27/12 at 12:38 AM|
beautifully written and so sincere...it goes right to the heart...
|Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/27/12 at 04:03 AM|
this is beautiful and sad
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 04:09 AM|
You've sooooo described that loss in a way that most of us could not. Thank you for this, for sharing, and for giving this loss a voice. *hugs*
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/14/12 at 01:46 AM|
Despite being a man, I feel your pain, as you've so poetically described and ascribed.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/14/12 at 10:25 PM|
I can hear the mournful song this evokes.
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/16/12 at 03:07 PM|
This is excellent! Powerful stuff indeed.
|Posted by Mo Couts on 09/15/14 at 09:20 PM|
This is heavy and powerful, as it should be. I cannot fathom how much this weighs to you, but it means a lot to me. So beautifully done.