|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/21/12 at 11:20 PM|
|Posted by George Hoerner on 01/22/12 at 01:09 AM|
Oh how I wish there was someone who missed me as much. Nice write lady.
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/12 at 03:25 PM|
Such a great sense of word play.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 01/22/12 at 05:57 PM|
The sense of distance is immense, in waiting for that ark of reunited stars...
|Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/22/12 at 08:16 PM|
love the way this rolls off of my tongue so pleasingly.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/27/12 at 02:12 PM|
this poem is a star which I shall name, Lovely. just Lovely.
|Posted by Leslye Writer on 01/31/12 at 05:31 PM|
One by one
Sun by sun
Simple and perfect.
|Posted by LK Barrett on 02/01/12 at 07:28 PM|
This is lovely...thank you for the write! LK
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/27/13 at 07:36 PM|
Lori, as much as it is cliche to say, your poetry is one of a kind. Why wish on stars, which are deaf dumb and blind when I could wish on any poem of yours, which see and hear and feel and capture more than most, for all that is within me to say, come true.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/28/16 at 06:44 PM|
Good to see this front and center!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/29/16 at 02:47 PM|
lovely, just lovely, thank you.
|Posted by JJ Johnson on 05/09/16 at 02:02 AM|
and I miss you...... too..