| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/21/12 at 11:20 PM ...excellent..... |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/22/12 at 01:09 AM Oh how I wish there was someone who missed me as much. Nice write lady. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/12 at 03:25 PM Such a great sense of word play. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 01/22/12 at 05:57 PM The sense of distance is immense, in waiting for that ark of reunited stars... |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/22/12 at 08:16 PM love the way this rolls off of my tongue so pleasingly. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/27/12 at 02:12 PM this poem is a star which I shall name, Lovely. just Lovely. |
| Posted by Leslye Writer on 01/31/12 at 05:31 PM One by one
Sun by sun
Simple and perfect. |
| Posted by LK Barrett on 02/01/12 at 07:28 PM This is lovely...thank you for the write! LK |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/27/13 at 07:36 PM Lori, as much as it is cliche to say, your poetry is one of a kind. Why wish on stars, which are deaf dumb and blind when I could wish on any poem of yours, which see and hear and feel and capture more than most, for all that is within me to say, come true. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/28/16 at 06:44 PM Good to see this front and center! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/29/16 at 02:47 PM lovely, just lovely, thank you. |
| Posted by JJ Johnson on 05/09/16 at 02:02 AM and I miss you...... too.. |
