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And I miss you

by Lori Blair

Since you've been gone
even the stars seem starless at night
so I shall name them all

one by one
sun by sun
but never two by two

and I miss you

oh, where do stars go as dreams fade
if I stand still long enough
will you hear me calling your name

one by one
sun by sun
but never two by two

and I miss you

Billions of stars waiting to be claimed
but there is only one star
with your name

one by one
sun by sun
but never two by two

and I miss you

01/21/2012

Author's Note: if I could just find the right star...or count the exact word..

Posted on 01/21/2012
Copyright © 2021 Lori Blair

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/21/12 at 11:20 PM

...excellent.....

Posted by George Hoerner on 01/22/12 at 01:09 AM

Oh how I wish there was someone who missed me as much. Nice write lady.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/12 at 03:25 PM

Such a great sense of word play.

Posted by Laura Doom on 01/22/12 at 05:57 PM

The sense of distance is immense, in waiting for that ark of reunited stars...

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 01/22/12 at 08:16 PM

love the way this rolls off of my tongue so pleasingly.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/27/12 at 02:12 PM

this poem is a star which I shall name, Lovely. just Lovely.

Posted by Leslye Writer on 01/31/12 at 05:31 PM

One by one Sun by sun Simple and perfect.

Posted by LK Barrett on 02/01/12 at 07:28 PM

This is lovely...thank you for the write! LK

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/27/13 at 07:36 PM

Lori, as much as it is cliche to say, your poetry is one of a kind. Why wish on stars, which are deaf dumb and blind when I could wish on any poem of yours, which see and hear and feel and capture more than most, for all that is within me to say, come true.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/28/16 at 06:44 PM

Good to see this front and center!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/29/16 at 02:47 PM

lovely, just lovely, thank you.

Posted by JJ Johnson on 05/09/16 at 02:02 AM

and I miss you...... too..

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