| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 01/12/12 at 11:40 PM No drowning. An exit is just an entrance to something else, right? At least that's the cliche I know about. :) |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/12/12 at 11:56 PM Beautiful, Jill....I love the nature imagery and symbolism and the smooth rhythmic flow of this....thx :) |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 01/13/12 at 12:22 AM I love this...so clear, concise, and well written. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/19/12 at 01:42 PM Having tread water more times than I care to count, I can only say I've been there Jill..and this tells it all so very well. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 01/22/12 at 07:01 PM taking a deep breath... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/12/12 at 02:10 PM understatement is saying that I merely love this poem. this poem is one which makes me want to rust along with the poet on the pier, desire nothing less than to drown simultaneously along. |
| Posted by Andrea Colton on 04/03/12 at 10:39 PM Beautiful. I can envision this piece being put to music. Would be wonderful lyrics. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/12/12 at 05:10 PM Exquisite rhyming scheme in this lament that I somehow missed the first time around. I pray for buoys and strong castle walls. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/12 at 05:03 PM Serious and yet playful at the same time. I know I read this before...and rated it, but for some reason my comment didn't stick. Nice work Jill! |
