| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Don Matley on 11/27/11 at 09:00 PM Loved this. Imagery readily invoked. The simplest words set up perfectly so that "small fingers"
conjures several pictures. I did not know you lived that close to me. That park is just four houses down from me. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/27/11 at 09:34 PM ...greeeat work, k-gal. cool. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 11/27/11 at 11:58 PM Beautiful I feel as if I am within harmony with nature..a much needed child-like gaze..and I can't even decide which stanza is my favorite! Remarkable work! |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/28/11 at 10:00 PM I don't think you could have ended that with anything better than "full circle." |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/29/11 at 09:57 PM Very, very nice - brought me right into this idyllic park (once I got past what I initially perceived as "prone black prawn") ;) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/01/11 at 04:44 PM Gees! So evocative in this season dropping all around us in orange-to brown wetness. I like the way I get a feel of wafting as I read your poem. Thanks for a beautiful piece, Kristina. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/17/11 at 02:33 PM such a lush tapestry you've woven, Kristina, enough to sustain and warm any wall that it came in contact with. |
