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Homeless Brain

by Kevin Fehlen

Wandering listlessly along the banks of irony
Living in a cardboard box of hopes and dreams
When the rain comes it crumbles easily.

There is a malign whisper from the distance
A man in a dark black suit
Grinning mute until you sleep

The ashes of coalish thoughts floating upon the river bank
Of dreams that start to sink
Deep into icy depth of rotting stink.

With no direction home, there is nowhere for a brain to go
It rots inside it's teeth, failing to bite into the meat
Of the life put on your plate.

Beware of Nick your mother said,
Do not live too much inside your head.

Take control of your reigns
And do not let him spoil your dreams.

10/06/2011

Posted on 10/07/2011
Copyright © 2024 Kevin Fehlen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gilly Wigley on 10/08/11 at 03:14 AM

Beautiful!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/09/11 at 04:10 PM

I love this, love the vivid imagery it invokes

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/22/11 at 08:01 PM

I really like the image of the brain rotting "inside its teeth" - the potential nutrition of "food for thought" lost in the chewing, long before it reaches the stomach. Nice.

Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 12:50 AM

Most Excellent! I lingered within..never looking the other way..Awesome work!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/21/13 at 01:30 PM

"coalish thoughts" - a unique phrase. I really liked stanzas 1 and 4. The idea of a homeless brain is such a cool concept.

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