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Ambivalentine

by Linda Fuller

I love how you adore me
your endless stories bore me
your playful antics charm me
your politics alarm me
your lovemaking’s ferocious
your manners are atrocious
your intellect’s stupendous
your sarcasm’s horrendous
I really love you, darling
and yet we’re always quarreling
I really love you, honey
or is it just your money?

02/13/2011

Posted on 02/13/2011
Copyright © 2019 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/13/11 at 10:16 PM

Oh wow, now this is sweet readible treat!

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/14/11 at 01:13 AM

Cute! very cute! unless it is true, in which case I think you might have more than one problem! Good write lady.

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 02/14/11 at 04:18 PM

I don’t write love poems. It is so hard to make them good. But I like yours; there is realness about it. A love poem is a hard to do and you did it well. Love has many problems just a fact, and the same reason all Disney movies end after the marriage of the beautiful couple, and they lived happily ever after………. Really?

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 02/14/11 at 04:22 PM

Great title BTW!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/14/11 at 09:14 PM

...fulfillimg read and heavy/cute.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/15/11 at 11:33 PM

LOL!...number one entry in the book of Hallmark Cards You'll Never See on Valentine's Day

Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/16/11 at 12:12 AM

This is a delight!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/11 at 04:16 PM

Oh, the truth of it!! Great write!

Posted by Julie Adams on 02/16/11 at 04:31 PM

LOL, I truly did, great quips and playfulness with the parallels. Congrats on reaching the top-rated list with this timely piece...happy writing, peace, jewels

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/17/11 at 05:25 PM

LOL! Couldn't have asked for a more appropriate title, or for that matter a poem to go with the title. Excellent twist to Valentine's Day poetry Linda.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/17/11 at 07:02 PM

hahahahaha!!! too fun!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/19/11 at 10:49 PM

WONDERFUL Still laughimg

Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/07/11 at 02:24 AM

The internal dialog of the soul can be quite disconcerting and honest. This little self-banter is quite a valentine.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/18/11 at 08:20 PM

love the wordplay, and excellent title :)

Posted by Mo Couts on 08/22/11 at 01:33 AM

LOVE the wordplay and the content; all around win!

Posted by Laura Doom on 12/06/11 at 11:28 AM

Read this as someone else's favourite -- simply brilliant. What else to say?
[sweet talking it into my f list]

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/08/13 at 12:48 PM

I would venture to say that it is the former, but then it could as easily be the latter, then again it could be an amalgam of both. Although as one who believes in the former I am shooting for love, which post the shooting is to hard to tag and label.

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