Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 12/19/10 at 08:25 PM Hahahaha, the line breaks kind of make this. Sweet. |
Posted by Jim Benz on 12/21/10 at 01:15 AM sounds kind of bestial Steve ;0 |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/02/11 at 02:08 AM Fun playful read. Although short, makes a great poem read aloud. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/02/11 at 07:47 PM fum poem/Liked the tone |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/02/11 at 10:02 PM ...(no puns) just a barrel of envy, clara and nadia said it best. line breaks and tone...cool. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/11/11 at 03:59 PM This just makes me smile and smile. Simple, clever, the message is clear. Ha! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/06/13 at 05:07 AM Good to see this as POTD! |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/06/13 at 01:15 PM congratulations, Steve. to say this poem gets my goat for POTD is an understatement. |