| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/13/10 at 08:25 PM ...a moving snapshtot of essence, care...soft determination...i envy her. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/13/10 at 09:19 PM I loved reading this story. Your last stanza said it all. Great write. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/13/10 at 10:37 PM George, I love the peaceful feel of this - nice job. |
| Posted by Darren Swift on 07/14/10 at 12:04 AM george, reciprocation time. I love this - even though it seems a work day I get a real Sunday feeling from it as each moment simply flows easily and gently into the next. Nice work! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/14/10 at 02:19 AM Quite the view from your eyes, George. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/14/10 at 03:52 AM I liked how this ordinary morning revealed a very special woman. Thank you, George. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/14/10 at 03:33 PM this is quite similar to my morning, this morning, except rather than dogs, she fed the cats, and rather than nurse, she's going to cut hair |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/16/10 at 12:24 PM Norman Rockwell couldn't have painted a more perfect scene. A day in the life of the poet, George Hoerner. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/16/10 at 01:46 PM The gentleness in this puts me in mind of an angel softly - like a whisper - moving about, dusting the area with her silver and trailing it out the door through the double doors onto the shiny sterile floors where vulnerable humans await her touch, her beauty. Thanks for this lovepiece. |
