| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/10 at 09:35 PM Oooohhhh.... what a glorious scene you've captured. Love it! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/19/10 at 10:58 PM Oooohhhh.... what a glorious scene you've captured. Love it! JULES...DON'T TELL PAIGE I STOLE FROM HER BUT I DID DIDN'T I...OH JUST BORROWED IT, EH?...i too loved each line...moon's[white] blossom, night's lapel [QUIT IT!--THAT'S DELICIOUS...]AND it is spring's first dance...this is delightful, haiku masters bow.
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| Posted by George Hoerner on 05/20/10 at 12:12 AM A wonderful picture of the night's entertainment m'lady!! |
| Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 05/20/10 at 12:50 AM And the award for best haiku ever goes to...Jules! |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 05/20/10 at 01:10 AM beautiful.....awesome julie |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/20/10 at 04:27 PM BEAUTIFUL, absolutely beautiful Haiku! Thanks for posting. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/21/10 at 10:10 PM High, high marks for this highku!! Loved it. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/22/10 at 12:04 PM Nature's formal dance... the poem infers a question. Who is the partner? Is the sun in a day dress holding hands at twilight or daybreak? Beautiful imagery that is customary for the form but brought to great heights by your crafting! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/23/10 at 06:54 PM Very beautiful Jewels! Certainly has that haiku impact and imagery. Well done! Adds to favourites. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 05/23/10 at 10:19 PM Most beautiful Haiku i've read so far this year. Adding to my faves. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/24/10 at 01:10 AM Bingo! Perfect haiku. This is quite charming. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 05/24/10 at 02:31 PM Lovely. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/25/10 at 07:54 PM I caught you Chaz! Bad boy. Bad, bad boy. I've always had this thing for bad boys... ;-} along with the tendency to REview fantastic Haiku... |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 05/29/10 at 03:46 PM Julie, this is simply stunning -one of the lushest haiku I've ever had the pleasure to read! |
| Posted by Carol Grant on 08/07/10 at 01:20 AM I love haiku. So few words so many images. Well done |
