{ pathetic.org }
 

collider

by George Hoerner

near the beginning
close enough to touch
time’s first tick and
long before the first tock

the rules were
still unwritten
no apple had yet
been bitten
no frame of mind
was there
to hang crooked
from my soul

in fact no up or down
no left or right
nor right nor wrong
no mirror in which
to see our tears

these would all
be invented later
by man impressed
with himself
as no animal
before or since

the rules set down
in those first fractions
of time did not rhyme
they could have
been written differently

with the imprecision
of a different logic
where one did not equal
and no alphabet spelled
love and hate
with gunfire and bombs

where no man
bought and sold love
where colliding protons
absorbed the impact
like two lovers
absorbing each other
and creating peace

03/22/2010

Author's Note: I may do more work on this piece later.

Posted on 03/31/2010
Copyright © 2025 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 03/31/10 at 11:41 PM

I especially love the last stanza, it is great

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/01/10 at 03:57 PM

Please define the last word-(only kidding). Great write- from start to finish.

Posted by Alisa Js on 04/01/10 at 07:42 PM

Aloha George, this one feels to me like a great time line from Genesis to the current time... in the life and love of man... alisa

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/02/10 at 02:58 PM

My favs are those last two stanzas. Great stuff, George. Thank you.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/20/12 at 12:43 PM

I love this George. Things could have indeed been a lot different, and they still could, if we cared enough to care to make them so, meaning not worse but better, if we even know what that latter word means any more. This ode for me goes a long way in correcting our course toward our betterment.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)