| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/16/09 at 11:22 PM I love the tone here, Chris. It is in touch, concurrent with nature. What a good way to be, what a reminder. Thanks. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 12/17/09 at 12:32 AM 1975 eh? This poem is older than I am! Doesn't stop it from being anything less than awesome, though. Beautiful images. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/17/09 at 03:33 AM Very nice Chris...CharMin |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/17/09 at 04:31 PM A decidedly Native feel to this beauty, Chris. How tiny we are but never minor children of this Mother. Sacred, indeed, the spiritual overtones are lovely. Thanks, Chris. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/17/09 at 10:54 PM I enjoyed the "elements united" here and how you have painted these images. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 12/18/09 at 04:19 AM This is a very lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 12/19/09 at 01:31 AM beautiful images throughout, the pace and tone are breathtaking -- it stands the test of time perfectly, highlighting what makes you an incredible writer (the thoughtfulness you put into things).
...and I was thinking about your christmas poem the other day, as it's one of those things I think of every year at this time since the first time I read it :) |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/20/09 at 02:18 PM Exquisite phrasing and illustrious imagery make this into a Haiku feel of a poem! |
| Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/23/11 at 04:30 PM The picture compliments the poem very well. I like the feel of nature in this, the warmth and the vastness of it. Well done. |
