| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/19/09 at 03:35 PM Those of us who've lived through a lengthy marriage will appreciate this one. Well done Glenn. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/19/09 at 03:44 PM ...a wonderful treatise of 'how IT could/should be and a more than proper to say nothing about your poetic countenance of said ventures...a well done 'spression of life de Glennus, i like i like. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/19/09 at 07:31 PM Lucky couple to be so remembered by an excellent poem in their honor. Great extended metaphor, Glenn...all the way home and right over the threshold! Thanks. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/19/09 at 08:08 PM How wonderfully upbeat and refreshing! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/20/09 at 03:46 AM What a wonderful wedding gift! A portrait of words for two blessed newlywed. I'm sure they will display it with love and pride. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/20/09 at 07:21 AM Beautiful! |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/20/09 at 11:41 AM They are two lucky stars with such a wonderful uncle as you. I loved this, Glenn. This is a fantastic piece in honor of them and quite an enjoyable read for me. :) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/20/09 at 07:25 PM Very nice Glenn....CharMIn |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/21/09 at 08:29 PM Excellent use of nautical imagery Glenn to steer the ship of a new marriage. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/09 at 01:51 AM This is very uplifting and instructive. A fine gift for the couple. |
| Posted by Joe David on 11/24/09 at 02:16 PM Most excellent. The rhythm is just almost perfect. The message is right on. You nailed it. Well done. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/24/09 at 06:44 PM Great use of metaphor and from one who has traveled for decades on this voyage of marriage I truly appreciate the content. Thank you, smh |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/26/09 at 08:36 AM I especially like the 5th and 6th stanzas. A fine tribute to joy and the marriage behind it! |
