| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/19/09 at 01:54 AM This has a ring of truth to it that makes one do a double take. Nice write Vince. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/09 at 02:53 PM You cause my imagination to strike out in new directions this morning shortly after awakening. Threadbare awakening... fascinating thing to think about. Thanks for the eye-opener, Vince. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/23/09 at 11:41 PM Not sure if this is meant to be positive or negative, but I do like the way you've laid it out. The title cleverly leaves the reader to comtemplate the implications: threadbare...things slide more easily...hard to hold on to, but can't grip as well without the threads. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/09 at 01:58 AM This is a very nice use of the thread, frays, and I especially like the word "detachments". |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/24/09 at 04:10 AM I sense a feeling of love lived through years of wear and tear, still hanging on to the thinnest, but carbon fiber filled strength, of love. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/24/09 at 06:42 PM This is thoughtful, easy, lingering, elegant...and i will cling to it today. smh |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/25/09 at 06:43 PM This is sweet and packs alot of meaning into so few words! |
